TNCowgirl

Now I feel bad because the next chapter it is all kind of exposed rather quickly which makes me almost want to completely rewrite it so it's slower. But then ...

Thanks so much for the review it means the world to me. I've gone through on my copy and hopefully can avoid some of the problems in the future, though ...

So I have to say that website has to be the best thing I've ever read. I know I have always had a problem with dialogue punctuation. Though I was ...

Thanks so much for the review. I went back and caught the things you pointed out. Though I'll have to catch the commas later. Commas seem to be my arch ...

Thank you so very much for the review. So you said drab style at the end. I take it that if I was to work maybe using the more powerful ...

So I don't think it worked in the main part of the document. Let's try here. @ ChocolateCello and @ artybirdy

I am really bad about showing not telling or whatever that phrase is. It is one of the things I'm trying to get better at, but am finding a hard ...

Thank you so very much for the review. I haven't posted it up here, but on my file I have gone back and corrected all of the mistakes that you ...

Ignore this, sorry for the double post.

Thanks, I think I'll just rewrite it. Thanks again!!! This was a piece I'd written a few years back, that was short enough for the YWS LJ, so thanks again. ...

Thank you SOO SOO SOO much, I'm going to put up Part 2. I'm trying to get this edited so I can send it in for the YWS LJ

***Anyone going to read this???***

Wow! That was really sad. Good, but really sad. It moved quickly, sometimes hard to understand. But it was good. Sad and good, a combination that is sometimes hard to ...

I'm just going to do a readers crit on this. Write more!!! *cough* It was really good. There were few things I caught, keep going please!!!

Oh my goodness!!! That was really really good. Keep going, PLEASE. There wasn't much that I could find wrong with it. Tell me when you do more, PLEASE. Sorry for ...