TNCowgirl

Twas good. I didn't really catch anything. I want to give you some tips though. When you have someone talk hit enter twice, least on here. It is easier on ...

I would've cried, but at the moment I can't. Stupid wisdom teeth. Anyways there was one thing in perticular that I noticed. [b]Me and Alex[/i] SHould be Alex and Me. ...

Wow, that was amazingly good. Please keep going, you can't just stop there and not have explained everything. I demanded you keep going or else.....or else......I don't know what I'll ...

Alright, you asked for a readers crit on all of your stuff. THis was the one that stood out that I wanted to read. My english teacher would mark all ...

Queen really as important has friendship? Maybe that is supposed to be as. I didn't catch to much, but where exactly is this going? So far the only plot I've ...

Here are two things that stood out to me. trying to take away. Take away what? In bed, The comma should be a period. And just change the period before ...

You utterly confussed me in the first part, maybe I should get my brain checked out, I am a lil' tired. But I got lost, seemed to be a good ...

Ok, so I reread everything so I could get a grasp on what was going on. It was good, there wasn't much that I could see that no one else ...

Wow, that was crazy!!!! There are several 'i's' that you need to capatilize. But other then that I didn't find too much that needed to be changed. It was quite ...

Well, it was interesting. I noticed how you used devonshire and such from P&P. Your name is quite cool too. Anyways, but to the story. It didn't really grasp my ...

Space it out more and you will probably have more people post on it. You need to hit enter twice (I'm pretty sure) When you have someone talking or start ...

Well, sense no one else has said anything. Here it goes. It was pretty good. Good discriptions and such. I didn't really see anything except you need to put a ...

Wow, very intersting. I didn't catch any mistakes, I"m not good at that kind of stuff. But it was cool. I couldn't really figure out if he was a guy ...

I like d it. REally good. Really well written and it worked. So good job. :D It was easy to read and it kept my interest. I understand her getting ...

I feel really really bad. Because I promised this crit a while back. So here it goes. It was pretty good. Just my mind doesn't like big words and there ...