TGS

its quite sad and depressing and its good really good it rhymes well and are you suggesting the narrator kills them self? -TGS

great good I was hanging on every word but I feel like I want more on where and when and the character but apart from that great graphic detailing.

its just a repetitive story a paradox if you will

Very good i liked the way you never told us who she was only describing her significant fetchers leaving it open to the imagination.