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Re: Everyone was Dying but Our Love Wasn't I Think
Hello Lylas! Sylar here for a quick review :) I'm going to review stanza by stanza, but I wanted to say I like your use of the ~ sign. It ...
Sep 24, 2014 -
Re: Magic Survives Chapter 1: The Fables
Hello GreenTulip! icannothearthings here for a short review. I think this was a pretty interesting story and first chapter, but you have certainly made me want to read more. You ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Our World Now: Introduction
Hello cassaundra1! This is icannothearthings for a short review. I think this is a pretty cool idea! I'm interested to find out more about this world and the characters in ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Misery or Humanity, Chapter 2
Hello rocketdog11! This is icannothearthings for a short review. Happy review day! I thought this was a really cool chapter and an awesome way to continue the story! I really ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Soul Searcher- Chapter 02: Link is (not) human
Hello CarbRundum! This is icannothearthings for a short review. Happy review day! I thought this was a really great piece and an awesome way to continue this story! I really ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: People that i know from my head~Chapter 1
Hello Pinkiegirl13! This is icannothearthings for a short review. Happy review day! I thought this was an interesting piece. I really want to keep reading, and I hope you put ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Border of Light, Two
Hello MaryEvans! This is icannothearthings for a short review. Happy review day and I hope our lovely Salsa Verde wins! I thought this was a really great piece and an ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Tracking Point (Chapter Two)
Hello MrTilgen! This is icannothearthings for a short review. Happy review day! I thought this was a such a great chapter two and an awesome way to continue this story! ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Tracking Point (Chapter One)
Hello MrTilgen! This is icannothearthings for a short review. Happy review day! I thought this was a really awesome piece and an interesting way to start off a story I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: DREAM Chapter 1: Odd Stone
Hello AdjiFlex! This is icannothearthings for a short review. Happy review day! I thought this was a really interesting piece and a cool way to start off a story I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Delete
Hello IDontKnowMaybeSo! This is icannothearthings for a short review. Happy review day! This was a really interesting essay! I'll start off with a few nitpicks and move on to some ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Rouge Pryde: Chapter One
Hello KnightTeen! This is icannothearthings for a short review, happy review day! First of all, why is "When Scott and some of the others got called out on a retrieval ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Right & Wrong Chapter 1
Hello racket! This is icannothearthings for a short review. It's review day! So I just read your prologue and reviewed it as well. I thought this was, okay. I'll start ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Right & Wrong Prologue
Hello racket! This is icannothearthings for a short review. It's review day! This was a great prologue to what I think will be a great piece. I'll start off with ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Part 1 - Think Like A...
Hello, icannothearthings here for a short review! This was really good! I have a few nitpicks: "self diary.Bad idea." You need a space between diary and the period. "Think like ...
Jun 18, 2014