SwiftShadow

I was amused by the dialogue, but I sorta had to make up what the characters did and what they looked like. You should read some scripts, and there's a ...

It is all too true that people fight because of the way that they look, to show superiority, or religion. It is in our human nature to fight and argue. ...

It was truly touching. It reminds me of how my pets died in my hands. It seems that every little animal soul is taken away from me. But then. . ...

This poem is awesome! Since someone already found out what may be a error, and I can't find any more errors, I guess I'll just say this is a very ...

Hello I'm SwiftShadow. So it seems that you need a lot of editing. I'll help you with that. OH also from growing wolf ears and a tail, but on the ...

I agree with everyone here. Best friends falling in love with each other is so common for a story idea, that it's not even funny. I think that you giving ...

Whoa. I thought the story was very good. It kept me hooked from the beginning to the end. I felt that it needed some other words for scream. Like the ...

It's really funny and simple. It's long, but it was very detailed and you didn't tell all of Harry's past like other fanfictions I see on other sites. Nice work. ...