Swetachowdhury0

Thanks, friend. You are making my day. I will look forward to your suggestion and will work on it. I hope you enjoy my story.

Thank you so much. It means a lot to me. I hope I improve well over time. And with all of your support.

Thanks, friend, yes I am trying to write. and I will improve with time I hope.

Hi singhvaibhav, thanks, dear. I will try to

Thank you so much eros, I hope you like it.. And yes I will try to write more and improve myself

Thank you so much eros, I hope you like it.. And yes I will try to write more and improve myself

Thank you so much eros, I hope you like it.. And yes I will try to write more and improve myself

Thank you so much eros, I hope you like it.. And yes I will try to write more and improve myself

Thank you so much eros, I hope you like it.. And yes I will try to write more and improve myself

Thank you so much... For your help and suggestions . I will work on them in future ...

Thanks dear.... I would try to correct myself with time....

hii,i find your story great. but i think you should focus more to make it look good. overall it is good. the dialogue delivery is good too.the story is also ...

Hii, rohan thank you ao much . This is my first time writing and i am really nervous about my story . I think that's tge reason of my mistakes.. ...

Hii, I find it amusing... The Story line is great... And it is clean and clear . It is easily understandable... I think you should have described about the protagonist ...

Thank you so much.....