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Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: Ethan's Take 5/9
Ooh, I DEFINITELY like Ethan's take better. The German thing is SO hot! Pity he's gay, though...I'd like to have a real version of him (but straight or at least ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Untitled; Part 2
Part 2 is up!!!! xD That's SO AWSOME!!!! (you did a really good job, too, btw)
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Meet vienna chapter 1 - part 2
Ack! Part 2 is up!!!! AND it's good! Gavin's a jerkface though...but Chase seems cool!
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
DUDE! You finally posted something! Okay, If you chance Vienna's name to kaylen, then it should be the same throughout the whole piece. In the last paragraph, you went back ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Adventures In My Mind ::Introduction Revised::
MUCH better! I can no longer see the once-terrifying towering chunk of text that was your info dump!!!!! XD YAY!!!!!!!
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Bloody Apple
haha. That was funny, and...short. It seems to fit Sirius's character somehow, but with a bleak outlook on everything. Remus sounds concerned and fatherly as ever, though. Keep up the ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: A little bit of madness
Nice imagery!!! And a really a good job with the rhyming scheme, too. It's easy to see what you're talking about, and sometimes that's hard to do in dramatic poetry. ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Circus Pirates 3
Ack!!! Henry sounds like a genuine hottie!!!! And sweet too...*Thoughtful look*...but,.. what was he in the circus? Do we know? Or has that not been decided yet? I can't wait ...
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: Adventures In My Mind ::Misapprehension 1::
To Edit an entry, go up to the top and click 'EDIT'. Don't post the ENTIRE thing again. blah. Other than that teeney little thing, you REALLY NEED MORE DESCRIPTIONS!
Mar 26, 2008 -
Re: Adventures In My Mind ::Introduction::
Her name is Yuna, she is over 7000 years old there should be a comma in 7,000. And this is WAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!! too talkative. TALK about your major INFO dump!!!!
Feb 26, 2008 -
Re: fantasy love story
Want to come live in my world. I will make sure you’re never sad ever again.” There whould be a question mark in the first sentence. Good story though. Elves ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Waiting out the storm
omigosh!!! that was...wow. You're a really good writer, and the subtle references to Christ and the chance for hope really speak out for themselves. in short... THAT. WAS. AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: DoaV (1st version): Prologue
DUDE!!!!!!!!! That's LOOOOONG!!!!!! looks kool though. i got it, and i'll read n critique it next chance i get. dunno wen that'll be, though.
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: My First Poem
omigosh!!!! wow. Why did you put spaces between the letters of some of the words? It's cool, just unusual. i read alot of poetry and have never seen that before. ...
Feb 8, 2008