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wait, you mean cliche? Yeah, I kept changing the ending then got impatient. Also, there is no shim, probably meant to say him, I'll change the stuff that was confusing.

Cool, I'll make sure to remember that and so will Noel. I like the part about trophies, I'll try using that in the next story. Look forward to more of ...

Oh yeah, we also have fixed most of what you said, thank you again!

I'm glad that the end is creepy, I was so worried that it wouldn't be creepy enough. I hope that the next one will be just as good, Noel and ...

We shall do our best, hope the bar isn't too high that we can't jump it. Maybe we'll try researching Sweeney Todd and Emily Bronte, we have never read them ...

Cool, thanks. We'll check out the book, might help the creative flow, but this was going to be the only one with Jack the Ripper. We'll try to continue the ...

Thanks so much. We were planning to reveal who the characters were a throughout the other stories. We'll try to work on the grammar, we're grammatically challenged. Your review was ...

This was nice, I never considered there being different types of loves. This was very good I think. It wasn't just about mushy gushy things like most love poems would ...

I really like this poem, though for some strange reason I feel like laughing at the end. I really liked the line "The blade does glint" but I cannot say ...

I really like the way that you started this story. Very good intro! Touchy subject indeed, makes you think something happened. This shows another side that many people don't know ...

I really like this. A novel sounds good. You have really good imagery and the mood is unbreakable. You did a really good job at making the cliffhanger. Novel please.

I liked the way that this was described. Just a question though, what do the last words at the end mean? I like the way that you used those for ...