SushiSashimi333

The Celestials are actually a really important part in this piece that will probably come in a little later. Now that I think of it, even I have no idea ...

I actually didn't realize that all the names started with "A", I just really liked those XD. The italicized part is what Lilith is thinking. I'm glad this succeeded in ...

Thanks! I do like Avatar, but I wasn't really thinking of that when I wrote this. The element controlling thing is all they have in common. :D

I tried to coordinate the order in which they were listed to tell what village they were from. Arya=Anima; Remy=Lympha; Arisa=Mulciber; Avi=Terra. I shall definitely fix that typo :)

Thanks for the review! I shall definitely work on having this story make more sense. I kind of was rushed since I tend to be an impatient person when dealing ...

Oh, I guess I really should clear things up, that was actually a flashback, but now that I think about it a very unclear flashback. This really helped me pinpoint ...

Thank you! I was hoping that someone might realize. Google translate sure does come in handy :D

I did not mean to "like" my chapter. I was trying to see who liked it and accidentally pushed like. I don't like my chapter. Well, in the button sense.

I don't really know what happened here, sorry :(

Yes, it really was a great chapter. I am curious as to what OliveDreams does in the future :D

Never mind, just found the next chapter :D

Yeah, I was thinking of describing the villages throughout the rest of the story so as not to overwhelm the reader. I'm really glad that you liked my story :D. ...

Yeah, this was just to make the readers mad at me. I like short prologues where lots of questions are brought up and answered later. I will definitely make sure ...

Yeah, I couldn't think well at the time for what I should use. I agree that "master" was really bad. Do you mind if I use any of yours? I ...

I think that they were both, sorry, that was a little unclear. Glad you liked it :)