SushiSashimi333

All the credit goes to Grif XD

Yup ^_^ As Grif said it's super fun! Of course we have to do a lot of discussing, and when we can't come up with an answer we leave it ...

Oh gosh! You're making it so hard for me not to give away the plot twist! Torture I tell you! DX

Thanks for showing me that little spot there Malachi! I shall definitely fix that and we'll make sure to update you when the next chapter comes out. Not quite sure ...

Actually he doesn't have amnesia. But that's something for later :P If I told you that now then I would be giving a twist away, but thank you so much ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I shall definitely change that one bit. I guess I did stop a little suddenly, but doesn't that just make you want to ...

O_O You're passive?! Sorry, that just surprises me XD but I guess I can see what you mean and how you go to writing this... I think... Good job by ...

Wow O_O I must say that I really loved the voice in this chapter! I'm going to go in depth but I just thought that I should say you really ...

You're right! It should be bloodline XD. I think I might have been blanking. Glad you liked it! Not sure if I'll continue with this, but I guess I'll see.

Yeah. I was planning on explaining things in this chapter, but I was so lazy and this felt like it was really long and it didn't seem to fit. I ...

Yay! I'm so glad that you liked Marya. I really like her too ^_^ I myself don't know what kind of plot twist I should make Sanna cause, but something ...

Oh, that sounds like a cool app. Sadly I have no "i" technology because my mom doesn't see the use in it and we don't understand all the deals and ...

I would have to agree with you about the back of a book part. I have no idea why but this seems to always happen with my prologues XD. I ...

Hey! Thanks for the review. I have no idea why but my prologues always end up short because I always imagine them like a movie opening. I can try to ...

Thank you for the review! Actually, I have no idea what time period this is because it takes place in a completely different world with different times, so there could ...