SushiSashimi333

Okay, first let me warn you that poetry isn't my forte, but we're learning about it now so I hope this will be good practice for me XD Your little ...

This is by far the longest piece I have ever seen on YWS O_O I'm going to attempt to review, but in groups. Obviously I can't do it all at ...

Hey! Sushi here to evaluate your story for the contest ^^ Now just a warning, I'm going to be harsh on your, so prepare yourself. You did have some errors ...

You have a really good voice in this and you make great points, however there are some slight flaws. Overall this was written really well, but you have to touch ...

Hey! I know I was supposed to read this, but I've been a bit busy with exams. I can't remember if I read chapter two, so I'll do my best ...

Okay, so I realize I'm jumping in right in the middle, but I'll try to help you the best I can. Imagery: I think I get what you were trying ...

Hey, Sushi here to review. I hope this ends up helping you and isn't just me rambling. If you have any questions about my review feel free to PM me ...

Hey, Sushi here to review! I hope this ends up helping you and isn't just me rambling XD Okay, so onto the review. I liked the way you began this. ...

Hey, Sushi here to review :D I hope this review helps ^^ Since your piece is so long I'll try not to go too in depth and just do a ...

So this will be souly based on how you captured Arian as a cougar in this story. I hope it helps :D You did an okay job at describing Arian's ...

My first impression of this from the title is that it would be a little humorous, now whether you meant it to be or not, it still managed to make ...

I am so sorry it took me so long to get here! I was meaning to... but I got sidetracked. So here I am ^_^ Your writing style is really ...

Hey! Here for the review as requested ^_^ You certainly do make this easy to relate to, even if writing comes naturally to us now it sure didn't when we ...

Hey! Here for yet another review! I know I've said this several times, but you really need to pay attention to spelling, and not just spelling. Sometimes you leave out ...

Hey! Here for another review ^_^ First let me point out you spelled vacuum wrong. I suggest running a spell check before submitting, or if you're not using Word you ...