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*shrugs* I know as much about 'em as you do. I didn't actually bother coming up with any background story for 'em ;).

That's cos I copied you ;).

Ah, it doesn't sounds too much like you've stolein my ideas then :). Vampires are bound to have lots of similiarities 8).

^_^ Now all you have to do is post up the next part (yes, I enjoy nagging ;)).

Hunter: What exactly are the similiaraites? Cos chances are, I won't really care all that much ;). Sam: Thanks for spotting the spelling error :). As for the lots of ...

Thanks for the reply :). Don't worry - you weren't being too harsh. Like I said - I wrote this a long time ago - and back them I made ...

Wow - nothing for four days... and then replies :). Okay... emotion less: You're probably right - in fact I don't even know why I put that in there. Probably ...

Yup. Naughty language... which is why this is a PG 13 ;). ... though to tell you the truth, I don't actually know what naughty language is in there... I ...

Actually... there will be no second chapter... nor third... nor... Well, not in the forseeable future anyways. I've decided I've asked to much of myself to fast - so instead ...

hekategirl: Everything out of this is actually based of my LD's (with the exception of the dying girl). - The false awakening - Going into the bedroom, and having perfectly ...

I like it but I have to agree with Lin Night. Maybe you could make the POV a teenager's- it would probaly sound better and make her childrens her siblings ...

Really? I like the sentence. You're the first person to complain about it, and my reviews from other sites seem to like it. So, I guess I'll keep it ;).

Emma: Nope, this was written in around ten minutes, and I don't really have any other plans for it. Lin night: This is my first attempt at writing something from ...

That doesn't discourage me ;). Constructive Critism = Good :). I chose your suggesstion I liked and added them in. Of course, there were some I disagreed with. For example, ...

Thanks for the reply :). I'll go over you're piece later today (i'm a bit stressed for time right now) :). Anyways - well, he is 17 (or 18... I ...