SuraikheySuraj

Thank you very much. You actually pointed out my grammatical error of using past tense. Thanks for that. It's great to have you around (virtually, of course) while writing

Thank you very much dear

Thanks for your suggestions Mechaswi. Your suggestions will definitely help this poem to improve.

Thanks for your review... My mothertongue is Marathi, and in Marathi, the special form of poem known as contradiction is famous. The same I was experimenting in English poetry. But ...

Just one question, are you from IIT dhanbad?

Fifth & sixth stanza need some space between them, however, that's just a typing mistake. Talking about the poem, I think reader should be able to connect himself or herself ...