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SuraikheySuraj

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Introverted

    Two voices speaking! Tough part is managing their different tones when they are representing different ideas or different types of people. But I am very glad to see that you ...

    May 18, 2019
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Meaning of Kindness

    It was a good essay I must say. I am, myself, from a residential institute called JNV, run by HRD Minister of India, hence I know about hostel life in ...

    Apr 18, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Politics Re: Immigrants

    Firstly, I would really really like to congratulate you for such an amazing & awesome narration. You really showed your writing strength and capabilities. Why I am praising you? What ...

    Apr 18, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - 4.3.A - Bipolar

    The one thing I am sure of is that, selection of words for the poem is incredible and I would like to congratulate you for that. However, I would like ...

    Jan 20, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Afterwords

    This poem proves your exceptional talent in poetry. Throughout the poetry, you managed to continue your pace and line of the story remained undisturbed. It is a great achievement for ...

    Jan 19, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: Marshy The Marshmallow

    You are very good at narration. The language is very simple and yet very impressive. The way you put all things is appreciable. But there couple of minor mistakes in ...

    Jan 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Politics, Technology Re: My Name Is Alex Paynes

    Definitely, you are very good at writing stories by narration. But in this particular story, I think you had some difficulty with writing the starting. Your first sentence is "My ...

    Jan 15, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: No Throne Shall Replace

    Fifth & sixth stanza need some space between them, however, that's just a typing mistake. Talking about the poem, I think reader should be able to connect himself or herself ...

    Jan 15, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Health, General Re: Mental Illness and Suicidality among Youth

    By all means of writing, it seems that you have worked hard and researched about this from bottom of your heart and this makes your article very strong and gives ...

    Jan 15, 2019


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