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Re: Introverted
Two voices speaking! Tough part is managing their different tones when they are representing different ideas or different types of people. But I am very glad to see that you ...
May 18, 2019 -
Re: Meaning of Kindness
It was a good essay I must say. I am, myself, from a residential institute called JNV, run by HRD Minister of India, hence I know about hostel life in ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: Immigrants
Firstly, I would really really like to congratulate you for such an amazing & awesome narration. You really showed your writing strength and capabilities. Why I am praising you? What ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - 4.3.A - Bipolar
The one thing I am sure of is that, selection of words for the poem is incredible and I would like to congratulate you for that. However, I would like ...
Jan 20, 2019 -
Re: The Afterwords
This poem proves your exceptional talent in poetry. Throughout the poetry, you managed to continue your pace and line of the story remained undisturbed. It is a great achievement for ...
Jan 19, 2019 -
Re: Marshy The Marshmallow
You are very good at narration. The language is very simple and yet very impressive. The way you put all things is appreciable. But there couple of minor mistakes in ...
Jan 17, 2019 -
Re: My Name Is Alex Paynes
Definitely, you are very good at writing stories by narration. But in this particular story, I think you had some difficulty with writing the starting. Your first sentence is "My ...
Jan 15, 2019 -
Re: No Throne Shall Replace
Fifth & sixth stanza need some space between them, however, that's just a typing mistake. Talking about the poem, I think reader should be able to connect himself or herself ...
Jan 15, 2019 -
Re: Mental Illness and Suicidality among Youth
By all means of writing, it seems that you have worked hard and researched about this from bottom of your heart and this makes your article very strong and gives ...
Jan 15, 2019
