Superfreakazoid

I love the images this poem brings to mind. The last two stanzas were beautiful, but "she is but asleep" seems to break the rhythm a little bit in the ...

Thanks you all so much! I honestly didn't think this was good (honest) but I'm glad y'all liked it.

Thanks to all of you. That line was an older poem, but my writing really hasn't changed a whole lot, so i suppose that was a completely pointless and idiotic ...

well, yeah, i write all rhyme-y and everything, it's just my style. Thanks, again...

'S'pose that's what I get for writing 60-second poems. Thanks for all the feedback, though.