Sunshine

Hm...I liked this! (I like them all but...) I have nothing bad to say about it. Although, I'm not a big a fan of the porn talk, but that's just ...

Thank you all so much! I worked really hard (I mean I wrote in like eight times...) on it and am SO glad you all liked it. I guess I ...

I like this! This is really cool. I think you've inspired me. *Goes off to jot stuff in her notebook.*

*Will put something totally helpful and amazing here after my brain turns up from it's vacation.*

Thank you so much! Your review helped a load. I know my spellingsa bad, but I think it's genetics! Let's cross our fingers!

Whats cool about this piece is how you mix Buffy and Twilight. I love that last part! I can't find any mistakes besides Lady's! Keep on writing! (Seriously. Or I ...

Although I think the imagery was good and the flow was fine, I think it was a baby poem. What I mean by that is to use bigger words, let ...

I am in everyway totally jealous. That's great! Especially since I haven't read a chapter of your novel in my life.

I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT! Personally, I think Prarie dogs are cuter than Meerkrats but *Cowers from Skins* stil love the idea and can't wait for part two! Maybe add in ...

Clever! I'm a lil' insulted though... Haha kidding! Good work!

Haha it's funny how you both thought your reviews sucked. They actually both really helped! I'm going to continue this and hope you guys review chapter No.2! I did rush ...

Ok you have a good title, good opening but where's everything else? Please most more.

Hey Bubble. I'm not one of those grammer-nitpickers I pick on plot. There is nothing wroong with your plot! I guess I'm just here to tell you that I love ...

Here's something thats bothering me: How does a blind lady and a man who can't speak communicate? Other than that, nice story!

HAHAHAhahahahaha. I like it alot. No faults as far as I can see! Please write more! Oh yes and I love your beggining. Very good. Would write more but got ...