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Re: Wisdom of Children
Wow, things is really really good. I mean, I loved it. I feel it fits more as a Narrative Poem, but it fits in either category. Now I did find ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: the fairy queen
Over all I found it enjoyable. I do agree with perdido on word choice, but I don't believe you need to knock it down. I suggest combining lines. The breaks ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: The Answer
Over all I found it enjoyable, but the rhyme threw me off. Personally I don't like poetry that rhymes, but you said it was an assignment so maybe you had ...
Apr 3, 2010