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Re: Memories: A Short Story
Oh, I'm sorry then. But yes, I understand how difficult it is to translate something real into fiction, because the readers aren't exactly omnipresent so they can't feel the way ...
Apr 19, 2016 -
Re: Mind
It's partly my job, anyway. Don't mention it. But then again, the story would've been more interesting if it was set in the earlier era. It would definitely fit the ...
Apr 18, 2016 -
Re: How the Devil Fell for a Common-day Saint
No, not at all. In fact, its probably the best thing you could've done.
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: An experiment in what people will enjoy reading
...Could you rephrase that? I assumed by snobbish you meant 'a person who wants to come off as smart', so by that I'm taking that you want the protagonist to ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: Silky Ink
I'm glad, then! Well, it is somewhat obvious, but usually I ask before I assume. Sometimes things commonly occur in people's works but they themselves have never experienced it--most of ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: The Thing with Wings
WHYYYY BRUH i swear ill ask one of the reviewers from the request boards to save this good for nothing little irrationality
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: Inner Beauty - Chapter 1.1
Ah, then apologies. Usually I'm more orientated to "first chapter=first part" that sort of thing, but lengthening it out will probably explain it a bit more. Thank you.
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: Zu
Oh, yeah, I know. I'll try to get there when my platter is less full, but currently I have a couple of books to look at, so yours will probably ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Two
To answer a couple of questions: -Demons use revolvers because revolvers look cool. Also, Hell is on a deadline so they can't do anything extravagant like burning eyeballs out. -The ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Four
OKAY THEN MY NAME IS BROCOLLI NICE TO MEET YOU.
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Four
Well, he's Asian, and I guess you could say he's anything but handsome. You could call him cute, but I call him boring compared to the other characters. I'm surprised ...
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Four
I'm glad you're liking it so far! I'll probably post the next two when the Green Room drops to five or six. Which ones are your favorite characters so far?
Apr 10, 2016 -
Re: The Thing with Wings
THANK YOUR PRECIOUS LIL SOUL unlike my heretic soul yours will probably go to heaven (we should just call the green room purgatory at this point because this work will ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: The Thing with Wings
...Okay but seriously, thank your precious little soul Because I'll be honest, I'm not a hundred percent proud with this. It's not my best work, in my opinion. But I've ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Two
Ah, yes, I see. Nothing wrong with that, of course--I personally hate romance, despite others shoving it in my face, so I won't do the same to you. I'm sorry ...
Apr 8, 2016
