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Sujana

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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Adam and Eve

    ...DID I JUST GET A REVIEW FROM LAREINE. *breathes* *screams internally* *subsequently dies*

    May 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Case of Schadel Kueper: Chapter 1

    Robin Kolfer says "Ich verlor meine Nummer %u2026 Kann ich Ihnen?"

    May 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Jim: Chapter 4

    YES I WILL BE A PAIN ABOUT IT TAG ME BRUH also tags dont work here i dont know why

    May 12, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: For All Intents and Purposes - pt. 1

    I'm very happy you decided to post this--I remember reading it in a Tournament, once. One of my favorite short stories from you. I'm not entirely sure if I should ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Kolfer: Prologue

    Oh crap, I missed that. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll definitely remove that part.

    May 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Kolfer: Prologue

    I enjoy putting myself in character perspectives while I'm writing first POV, which is why most moral people won't agree with Kolfer wholly. She wouldn't apologize for saying the policeman ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Kolfer: Prologue

    In all actuality, I have no idea what to do now. I have an entire plot planned ahead, and I can say without a hint of doubt--this part has nothing ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Kolfer: Prologue

    I try to. I rarely ever write in the first POV so I don't know exactly how to do that, but I'll try later on. Should I tag you in ...

    May 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Kolfer: Prologue

    Thanks for the review! By the way, the Kolfer character is a girl, not a guy.

    May 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Considering Most Breads Rise

    I'll be honest, I haven't had the chance to read your first few chapters so that's why I couldn't review it properly (I mistook it for a short story. I'll ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Considering Most Breads Rise

    Shit. Shit , I thought this was a short story and it was still good. Damn this, I can't review this now, can I? Give me another moment. PM me ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Literature Re: The Thing with Wings

    OH THANK THE LORD ALMIGHTY IT'S FINALLY GONE FROM THE GREEN ROOM thank you noelle, that was extremely helpful. I now know what to cut to make this a bit ...

    Apr 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Crowning Glory

    Oh, that would be great! It would be interesting to read something else from you.

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Literature Re: The Thing with Wings

    aw thank you bae *hugs even harder* *chokes you in hug* sorry but then again youre deadpool so youll live

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Literature Re: The Thing with Wings

    hey bruh if you really liked it could you leave a like on it so that at least it doesnt look sad and lonely *hugs*

    Apr 22, 2016


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