Sujana

Hey there. Happy Review Day. Here's something for you to chew on, if you so fancy. "Space is lonely," Flight Engineer Tracy McAvoy looks out through a window. (...) "Space ...

Hey there! I haven't reviewed anything in a long while, so mind my rust, if you may. I'll head into my small nitpicks later, but overall, I think the work ...

So I didn't do a review of Chapter 10 because a) I'm way too late on that bus, and b) because I don't have any huge issues with it. I ...

Hey there. I'll be your reviewer today, and I'm hoping it'll be useful, if albeit a little harsh. So, let's start with the grammatical nitpicks and all that. The water ...

Right, so I think you know that I'm a little fond of your works (I don't want to sound creepy but yeah that's pretty much true) so to be honest, ...

I feel like this poem could be taken either as the persona criticizing the woman in the poem, or the persona being the woman in the poem criticizing herself. I ...

It's surreal reading Malay-Indonesian words in an English text and knowing what they mean before being told what they mean. I mean, I guess haram is technically Arabic, but you ...

Hey there. I like the concept for this poem, and how it starts out with the main gist ("I will not cry") and describes the girl the author is heartbroken ...

Heya, friend, I'm here to review your work. It's pretty interesting, and I like the premise, but I have some thoughts on the execution. It is dark with only a ...

Okay, so at this point I'll be honest with you--I'm not really digging where Lauren and the rest of the gang are going here. I started out liking Lauren's characterization, ...

“I’ve already told you no. The Grammys are in a week and my dress is already done, the hair and makeup artists are already booked, everything is taken care of,” ...

Back at it again with the reviewing, as you can see. Because I don't want to overwhelm you, look up Carly Rae Jepsen's "Run Away With Me" and "This Kiss" ...

Heya Daen, I'm back. Going to quickly run through this, but to address your comment on the last review, I like that you're planning conflict for later chapters, but I ...

Hello, friend. I'm back again, and without realizing it I might become a permanent fixture to this work if you plan on finishing it. I have a couple of thoughts, ...

So, besides what Blue already mentioned in her review, I also have a couple of things to say about the work. I'll be looking a bit into grammar as well, ...