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Thanks, I am really honored by your reviewing of not one, but both of my stories. Sorry for the scare. I am glad you enjoy my stuff.

Really awesome and all, only one tiny thing... Kathy reminds by sound the name Carrie, Stephen King's first book, about an unpopular girl who eventually burns half the town to ...

I personally thought that from one hand, it sounded very grim and empty; but on the other hand, it had something optimistic inside. For me it was a very rewarding ...

It sounded like a real tragedy, very filled with emotion and pain. One thing though, to me it seemed (from reading) more like lyrics then poem. Anyhow, it was very ...

That was pretty awesome. I liked how without any description, you've managed to pass the experience. another thing I personally thought was great was the fact it was all in ...

thanks for the help. It's really great when people correct me because it really helps me learn (I think) About the world: (I wanted to explain during story, but I ...

thanks, actually, it wasn't even supposed to be there, as it was unrelated to the story, i just missed it out in the editing somehow. so, thanks for drawing my ...

what do you mean? (I need at least 10 words, we can't all be smart, can we?)

There is no problem with serial killers, if you like the idea- and have plans for your character- you shouldn't abandon it, I just stated that it's a bit old ...

always

thanks for the review, I'll try to fix those issues in the future. however, just for the record, I have to say that I just can't see all these flaws ...

actually, there isn't one answer, i went with the open ending, but only on the later parts i realized that it may seems as he is the killer, originally it ...