Stori

Sevenpaw is confused. You should start this off earlier.

This is very good! I found a tune to match the words. I really don't have anything to critique here. Like I said, it's good.

I have one. Song in the Silence is brilliant.

Break the words up into smaller paragraphs.

I don't believe I've seen text that thick ever. Break it down!

Seriously, where is the post?

The main problem with this is that it seems to be one long sentence. Otherwise it's well-done.

You shame me, sir. I should be working on "A Hundred Suns." I cant' help it; so many other critters in my head. Honest.

"Two and a half kids..." Zahwot? Is that supposed to be a reflection on Americans' obsession with statistics? Anyway. Perhaps this should be longer. Add some more arguments. Spice it ...

Update: "Ash" is being stubborn. I'll post what I have very soon, but don't expect much.

Expressions are tricky. You can say something as simple as "he smiled," or something as strange as "His huge grin lit up his face. It looked like he'd need a ...

Expressions are tricky. You can say something as simple as "he smiled," or something as strange as "His huge grin lit up his face. It looked like he'd need a ...

Expressions are tricky. You can say something as simple as "he smiled," or something as strange as "His huge grin lit up his face. It looked like he'd need a ...

I'm no genetics expert, but I think mixing two distinct species will work. The most common technique is to breed two types of the same species. Take a look at ...

Hey, don't forget to mention the Nativity. It's not Christmas without Christ!