StoneHeart

O.o Thanks, appreciated. I actually wrote these entire two chapters in only a couple hours. TOTALLY UNEDITED> So yeah, they definitely need a LOT of work. But! Thanks.

Hmmm, thanks! Glad you liked it.

Hey! Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it, this is actually a novel I'm writing, so hopefully it'll last a while. Welcome to YWS :)

My'z muchly'z thanks you.

Lol, this the only chapter I wrote like this. I'm just gonna post the tenth chapter here!

Wow, thanks. I never actually that about that with the names. Will do for sure. Interesting name . . . I'm checking it out here~

Thanks, this is gonna take some work to think through. But very helpful!

Okay, thanks! I'll take that into minds, the '...''s are for effect :) Read it out loud and you'll see. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm hoping so . ...

I know, this is one of my worst chapters. For sure. I just wrote it in a couple hours (Rough draft). I'm going to get back at it and totally ...

The writing's goin off the screen on my end. Ouch.

Whoah whoah whaoh. Maybe it's just my computer but this seems wrong. I don't mind scrolling up and down when reading a book, but having to scroll sideways is a ...

Thanks, this was a very useful review. I really should have put a 'Unedited' note in there somewhere, because this chapter is completely unedited. Anyway, all those grammar problems have ...

Wow, thanks for the review first off. Okay, the first part: Yeah, thanks for the hint, I can do something about that. Just a little tidbit for now. The story ...

It isn't. Hmm, I'll see about it. I posted the first five parts of this story on another website, and I never heard of my trailing offs being a problem. ...