StoneHeart

lol arc, it was a great review, thanks! The first suggestion I shall, of course take! The second one I'll look into as well :P Thanks again!

Lol, I'm still working on my dialogue marking problems. :) Your exclamation points point is completely right! I'll see into it! Same with the first suggestion. Thanks for those. And ...

Lol, I'm still working on my dialogue marking problems. :) Your exclamation points point is completely right! I'll see into it! Same with the first suggestion. Thanks for those. And ...

Lol, I'm still working on my dialogue marking problems. :) Your exclamation points point is completely right! I'll see into it! Same with the first suggestion. Thanks for those. And ...

Lol, I'm still working on my dialogue marking problems. :) Your exclamation points point is completely right! I'll see into it! Same with the first suggestion. Thanks for those. And ...

Lol, I'm still working on my dialogue marking problems. :) Your exclamation points point is completely right! I'll see into it! Same with the first suggestion. Thanks for those. And ...

Lol, this isn't harsh in the least (ever gotten a review from LC?) *shivers. On your first objection (grammatical one) you are, sadly, incorrect. I'm not listing a row of ...

Okay, thanks! :P

Usually I'd be with you on the first objection, but I was feeling random. Don't take it as part of my style. For the second . . . well, what's ...

lol, the tripping up was intentional!

O.o Thanks.

>> This has gotta be the best review reply ever

Ignore the link.

. . . Um, something really cool that you can do is PASTE. Paste your work (In the link) onto the bar in 'submit'. It'll post it.