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Re: Lifeguard
A bit complicated wording. Not easy reading.
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Think Ch. 1
Two words: Idea control. Two more: PoV Determination.
May 12, 2015 -
Re: Brain Dead Creativitiy
I get your point, but classic poetry and hiakus are very different. Honestly I don't like poetry OR hiakus. Hiakus first though
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Brain Dead Creativitiy
I'd say this is more Hiaku ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Brain Dead Creativitiy
Poem= poetry. Hiaku= not poetry. Google a good list of poems and hiakus. Compare how different they are XD I don't think you can combine them.
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Brain Dead Creativitiy
Umh. I could argue with the statement that a poem and hiaku are the same thing in ANY situation ... ever.
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Little Sister chapter 1 EDITED
D.I.S.J.O.I.N.T.E.D.
Jan 13, 2015 -
Re: Act Like An Adult, Be Treated Like An Adult
I smell something ... circular in here.
Jan 13, 2015 -
Re: I want to be like Google
I hate this 'ideal picture'.
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: Hunger Games Entry
Duuuuh. >.> I'm saying she's not a great character for this. needs modifications to be better.
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)
No prob.
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: Chapters 1 The Token (Please review! Plan on publishing so need it)
Had to like this XD
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Chapters 2 of The Token
Hey man, you might wanna break this up a bit into 1-2 thousand word pieces. Makes it much easier to review. If you need points I have tens of thousands ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)
OH, yeah. Two other things. FIRST: GET BACK TO ME ON THIS REVIEW! I need some feedback and might have something that I could use a review on myself. Second: ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Gather Me Flowers (Avari's Song)
Listening to that song and then reading it definitely helps.
Apr 16, 2014