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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.3 | Back in the White Box

    CRL - thank you for another awesome review! :D I glad that you are starting to understand her better, I'd love to know who you think she is so far. ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.2 | Wicked Medicine

    SmylinG - Thank you for reviewing once again. Would you mind if I requested a review from each time I post a scene from this novel? Yes, that is how ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.1 | The Girl in the White Box

    Black - Thank you for the review. :] The reason why she puts the pillow over her head is not because she's trying to "desperately" remember but because she wants ...

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.1 | The Girl in the White Box

    SmylinG - For the first question you pose, you are correct. As for the second, you'll have to read on to find out. ;] Yeah, I did label it as ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.2 | Wicked Medicine

    Apple - Sorry, I thought I made that clear in the first scene. Basically this is a flashback to before she was kidnapped: She took the pillow from the bed ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.2 | Wicked Medicine

    Chimp - Thanks so much for the review! I'll definitely go ahead and fix those few things. xD Also thanks for the questions, right now you are asking the right ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.1 | The Girl in the White Box

    SerenityCross - I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you. :D Ziggiefred - Thank you for the review! Especially the questions and predictions. :D I’ve already plotted out the whole ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.1 | The Girl in the White Box

    Chimp - Thanks so much for the review! Anyways, I did mean to describe Addie and Madame Councilor more, but it just seemed to get in the way of the ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.1 | The Girl in the White Box

    CRL - I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'll definitely look out for repetitiveness. Thank you! Lollipopper - I think it was mostly because of this scene that I did ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.1 | The Girl in the White Box

    Silver - Thank you so much! I know my grammar isn't that great in this piece, I probably should have mentioned that I'm not really focusing on it at this ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Looking Glass Curse

    Lorrilrakest - Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Addawen19 - I don't know... but we might find out in December. Kyllorac - Thanks for telling me your opinion. I agree ...

    Oct 2, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Looking Glass Curse

    Ranger Hawk - Thanks so much! I made a few changes to it so I hope it sounds better now. Auteur - Well thank you for reading it even though ...

    Sep 15, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Looking Glass Curse

    Thanks Lauren! *feels a little OC for commenting back right away* XD I'll think about expanding it, and I'm glad you liked it enough to suggest that I expand it. ...

    Sep 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The 1st Chapter of Paradox Parade - Heirlooms

    Thanks Smaur! I edited it, and now I hope it's better and not so boring. (cuz I broke my own rule about that) haha... anyways thanks, the review was fantastic! ...

    Feb 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The 1st Chapter of Paradox Parade - Heirlooms

    Blink - Thanks =] I'm glad it's not terribly long. When I change the title I'm going to change it here as well, so hopefully people won't be too confused. ...

    Jan 9, 2009


Remember: the plot is nothing more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.
— Ray Bradbury