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Hello, This is so good! And I gotta say, I'm kind of outraged on your behalf right now that it was published days ago and hasn't gotten any reviews. What's ...

Hello! This one's gonna be tough to review. I'll try, though. Firstly, I'm going to be honest with you: it needs some work. Generally I give a story the benefit ...

Hello, This is a very charming piece! I didn't know what to expect, but I was pleasantly surprised. I really like your writing. The melodious tone of the piece, the ...

Hello, Well, I agree with what Charlotte said: This is an amazing piece. Truly. It's skillful and smart; the way it snakes toward its conclusion is done with such delicacy ...

Hello, Firstly, I'm so sorry for your loss. Secondly, this is a beautiful piece. The way you describe the contrast between your grandfather's death and your memories of him is ...

Hello! Well, this is a delightfully odd story! (And I do mean "odd" in the best of ways—odd as in original, fun and interesting.) It was a very entertaining read, ...

Hello there— Let me just say: WOW. This is... this is amazing. In fact, I'm not sure I can convey just how good this is, and how much I liked ...

Hello, This seems like an interesting story, I must say. I did read the prologue first—though I think it would function better as the beginning of this chapter, as it's ...

Hello, This is a really sweet little chapter you've got here! You capture Connor's feelings for Ethan amazingly well, so excellent work with the emotion. His nervousness in Ethan's presence ...

Hello, I'm so glad this is the first piece I'm going to review, because this is so, so good! Here's what I liked: The tone is on point. You managed ...