Stealth_Slicer

Hmm very dark but I am used to things like that and can usually spot stuff coming so wasn’t really scared by what happened. This reminds me of the old ...

I like the blurb too. Unfortunately I read chapter one first so wasn’t fully informed on what has happening but now I understand. I really like chapter one as I ...

The age-old question what if Germany won the war. I like war literature but have never read the stories were Germany won but I am going to read this one ...

I really liked it I am a huge Sci-fi fan. This reminds me of a sci-fi thing I was writing for a friend years ago if I find it I ...

I like it but I agree with Coco, I think something might be missing but I can’t place it ether. But don’t get discouraged. I really like the story so ...

Now that was unexpected. I wasn’t overly keen on this but I really liked the end. I think you might have a knack for writing things like this and I ...

Hmm…I don’t know what to make of this one. But I do know it sounds interesting, I hope you do keep writing. This story hits me as sort of a ...

Yes I liked it very well written. I don’t have the faintest idea what plot might spawn but I think you have something good in mind, and I think you ...

I thought it was a good piece. But I think a little more back story would be good. For example perhaps say more about how he lost his parents, and ...

Very nice but here are some things I felt cold have been improved. The city. Although you say everything was abandoned I didn’t really get a large feeling of it; ...

I liked that and it speaks the truth. It is hard to let go of being insulted etc. I know I got bulled a lot and replied with insults too, ...

That was very emotional. I liked it a lot. You should keep writing, but I couldn’t help but smile at the twenty-story building part. It was…unexpected for me, and I ...

Hi all I really like it very mysterious. Not much of a background is given but I think it was intended here, I think you could have put more in ...

Hi all I liked it but even though the core concept was a guy trying to join the military it didn’t seem to show reasons why he was going to ...