StealTheWorld

I agree with the dangerous part. It's not as ridiculous as it is unthinkable for some. Our reasons for it is ridiculous, though, because we're humans. We want to look ...

Yes! I was looking for someone to mention my use of the word 'friends' and relate it to the fact that the character's thinking is all wrong. Thanks!

Thank you very much!

Thank you, Dark! The feedback was great and I loved seeing your view on the poem. :)

Hey there! "This poem is pitifully incomplete..." drove me to realize that you're right when you say that it needs more. This was really more of a description of her ...

Hello! Sorry for the late reply. Thank you very much for the help. It's much appreciated!

I'm sorry. Well, a stranger's words can hardly help, so I'll leave it at that. I hope you're okay now.

I actually got the names from one of those random name generators :) They WILL be changed and given more thought, though. Thanks!

Thank you! I'll be sure to follow your advice when I edit. -Dark

Thank you for the constructive criticism! I've been searching for a site that would actually provide me with such instead of just an onslaught of meaningless reviews. I'll fix this ...

It can be spelled both ways. In the U.S., for example, people tend to use 'color' instead.

alilovessandy, I really love the emotion in this. Your voice gives me this vivid image and it's just beautiful. I can picture everything you described quite well, so congratulations. I'm ...