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StealTheWorld

sometimes i laugh. sometimes i wander.

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: it was her smile

    no problem! and i thought you might like the quote :3 have a good one!

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Blue Jeans

    i came here in hopes of getting another review done. i guess that isn't happening any time soon because i can't find a single thing to critique. "He prefers gray ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: it was her smile

    "Our love broke my heart - and stopped yours." - Lemony Snicket this was absolutely beautiful. so, so vivid and heartbreaking. the only thing wrong is this: "not for dreams ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    thank you, thank you, thank you! have a blessed day

    May 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    thank you!! i'll see what i can do about connecting the third paragraph more :)

    May 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    i'm rather at a loss for words as well, friend. thank you so very much :)

    May 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    have mercy on my poor little heart, shiney. i can only take so much before i burst into happy tears :') this was, by far, the kindest review i've ever ...

    May 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    believe me, i understand what you're saying haha. thank you for reading and leaving such a kind review/comment. it means the world to me :)

    May 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    thank you for reading! grudges tend to hold us back. i wish you all the best with your parents and future endeavors (:

    May 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    thank you for the help! i'll be sure to check your poem out.

    May 8, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cutter

    thank you so very much :) it means a lot.

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: sinking ships

    well, you're wonderful.

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: sinking ships

    oh, look. my face is stuck in a ridiculous grin. thank you very much for your kind words. :)

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: sinking ships

    thank you a hundred times over :) i'll fix it up. thanks again and have a great day.

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: sinking ships

    thank you so much for this. you're a huge help! i'm looking to edit soon, so it was great to get the feedback. have a nice day!

    Aug 5, 2014


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