Starstruck_Sarah

Wow this was great! A bit vague in a few parts, but otherwise I could see the vision clearly. Let's pick some things out now... I stalked slowly toward the ...

I read it! And now I'm reviewing it! So, I loved how you describe ALL of the characters. A lot of authors tend to only focus on main characters, but ...

Hello EDay! I'm here I loved this preface. It makes me want to read chapter one. Well, let's get down to the dirty stuff. I screamed at the mirror and ...

It's good, except I'm not very good with poems, so the reason behind this poem is vague to me. The lines are choppy, and the flow is broken into little ...

This is great, EDay! (Heehee) The details are great, and the image is very clear in my mind. Here's a bit of picky grammer details: No. but I am truly ...

I really like on how Nanali has changed since her heart has left her body. I enspecially like how you said, "She didn't feel sadness, hurt, angry, or anything, she ...

I like the descriptions, but at the beginning let's tone it down a little. It can drive readers away with too many details. I know this may sound strange, but ...

I was hooked by the first paragraph. This is a really deep story, and it has alot of potential. The only thing that bothered me were when the story had ...

This is a nice poem. It looks like a list, which can be good and bad. When it's a list, people sometimes don't want to read it. It drives them ...

I loved reading it, and the vibrant details kept me into the whole story. You really described Legend's Hallow well, and I could visualize it. I also want to see ...

Wow, this is impressive. When I read this, it made me think of the word "Teenager." When you said that the word "Wild." comes with it, I nodded my head. ...

I must say, the rich words in this piece make me ask so many questions. There are many vibrant details in here, and I can watch this scene play out ...