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Re: Violent Forced Direction
Thanks. Something else to learn.
Jul 27, 2005 -
Re: Violent Forced Direction
Think of driving. It is strange to say, I do not use a thesaurus. I think in phrases, and complex words, so it comes natural to me to write that ...
Jul 26, 2005 -
Re: Untitled Questioning
I agree that it needs to grow. Show more detail of the abstracts you are trying to reach. But I like the idea there are questions the reader must ask ...
Jul 26, 2005 -
Re: Pulse
I enjoy the rythem of it. The pulse is the basic rythem we can relate to with another person. No matter how two people are unalike, they both have a ...
Jul 26, 2005 -
Re: Thoughts,Strands, and the void
Again this shows my like for the short, simple image something can make. Thanks
Jul 24, 2005 -
Re: water thoughts into nothing
I am never into rhymes. It just happened that way. This one is someone losing their grip on reality and memories. With that lost, the lost of life and passion ...
Jul 24, 2005 -
Re: day
For this poem, it shows the quick disjointed thoughts of someone starting another drudge of a day. Distain, anoyance, and just dealing with what needs to be done. It is ...
Jul 24, 2005 -
Re: wondering
The light is your preception of your place in life. Darker it is, less you feel you can make a change in anything. Make it brighter, just watch life and ...
Jul 22, 2005 -
Re: Falling
Pulling down from the point of what you have fallen, I do admire how the poem showed the speed of decent
Jul 22, 2005 -
Re: water thoughts into nothing
Danke
Jul 22, 2005
