Starrywolf

Oh, and link to whatever you want reviewed on my wall, I'll get to it tomorow if possible. :)

Thanks! :) And good job catching the reference.

Yeah, I wasn't too sure about the pacing. I'll definitely take that into consideration!

No BBC coding in the new format. (I think you just copy/paste the image, or something.)

I love the way it's organized and formatted. Very attention-grabbing and works well with the story. I also like the story- an easy, short, and interesting read is always welcome. ...

The... story? Nope. My cousin watches Psych too. It's partly inspired by the Yin/Yang ones.

Umm... nevermind. DX

Like the above posters said, a couple issues with capitalization/punctuation. I love the voice, I could almost hear it being read out loud. Nice word choice, flow... Not much to ...

I liked it! I could almost hear them singing it (though you probably imagined it differently,) and it seemed to flow well.