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Hello there, creativityrules. I will start reviewing your story by spotting the grammatical and punctuational errors then I'll mention my opinion about it later. They shiver as I pass ; ...

Hey Lava, I''ll start reviewing your story by spotting the grammatical and punctuation errors then I would give my opinion about it. (You might find my comments similar to the ...

Hey, it is me again for a second review. (Feeling quite curious about what is going to happen next in your story) Firstly, I'd start by listing the errors then ...

Hey there, LittlePrincess. Your story might be one of the best that I've read here on YWS. Kinda making me excited to check the second part. Generally, it was very ...

That was....hilarious!! I could stop smiling while writing this review. :D About your story, it was quite well-written but it has got some errors that needed some fixation. A 16-year ...

I may not consider this a short-story but a wonderful romantic moment written in a simple yet meaningful way. I wonder how you got inspired to read this in a ...

Thats was pretty enjoyable. I felt sad and sympathetic for poor Aden. Introduction: Personally, I don't like stories that start with very short dialogues. “So. Guess this is goodbye.” “Yeah.” ...

Honestly, this is a beautiful & joyful story. Also, It is well-written and has got some great descriptions. > Introduction: I consider the introduction the most important part of the ...

I have seen many great cover designs for IcyFlame's novel, and honestly, your cover is one of the best covers designed for this contest. Since I haven't read the novel, ...

I love the message that you were trying to send through your story, it is absolutely amazing. However I think your introduction (first paragraph) lacks some description. For example, you ...

"Shh... We both know that’s impossible Gana...God knows how I’ll miss you. Promise me that , Gana. Just always stay the same." " H aha Todd! You're talking as if ...

That was pretty enjoyable to read and never felt bored while reading every sentence of your story. I don't think you have any grammar or punctuation mistakes. It was so ...

Nutty, your story is really fascinating! Personally, I love that type of short-stories (150 words), they are short, simple yet very meaningful, and your story covers all those. I had ...

Hey dhanshucool! First of all, I'd like to welcome you to YWS since you're a new member here. Secondly, I have read your story. It is quite interesting. My favourite ...

hey n1o2u3r4! (or I should say El Salam Alikom since you're muslim :) ) First of all, happy Ramadan to you and all your family & friends. I'm muslim too ...