Stargirl101

Wow. Kafka's reveiw was kind of harsh, even if it did bring up some points. What I don't understand is how she falls in love with Frank, yet ends up ...

This is a really good piece of writing. It is very surprising that you are only 11. But bear in mind, there are some things you could work on. Sepia ...

OH MY GOD! I never knew Gambit was bi-sexual! Or that Bobby Drake was gay. Bear in mind, I have not seen X-Men in a while. And there is a ...

This is really good! Volleyball13 is right though. I think it should be 'The first four years of my life were the closest thing I had to being normal'. Other ...

It was a totally cool prologue to a story I can't wait to read more of! The fact that the man in this piece is praying to God, and the ...

Oh! It was so beauiful! This is a truly astounding piece of literature! I'm not usually the biggest fan of Historical Literature, but this was so amazing1 The detail in ...

Wow. You have managed to capture the essence of naivety in veganism, yet you have produced a palate of descriptive writing which is not overly detailed, but delicately balanced, and ...

Wow. This is amazing. The fact that you are only 12 makes it more shocking. You have amazing potential. Apart from one typo, everything else was perfect. The discomfort in ...

I'm not the best at judging poems, but this poem tells a beautiful story. Dancing together, we slowed To a more graceful flow One moment we were there And the ...

How am I like the first person who has commented on this???!!! This is astounding!! It's a beautiful piece! I know I should stop using so many exclamation marks, but ...

I'll just write about all 3 in this one. This was an amazing piece of literature! I love the whole story of the young man with a wife that had ...

This is an extremely poignant poem. I enjoyed all of it, and it brings up alot of questions that people want answered. I love the poetic style of it and ...

Ooh, she works for her parents? I understand the whole family business thing, but seriously, what guy treats his daughter like that, even though I understand that is his role. ...

Oh gosh! I wonder what this guy's (or possibly girl's) secret is? What is it he wants from Casey? All these unanswered questions give the writing a more interesting twist, ...

This is very good. I am sure that Nate and Annabeth end up together, if Nate gives up drugs, and Annabeth leaves her family, but that's your descision, even though ...