StarGazer

Hey! Me! No one dies in this part! It's shocking! I like the new character, but your story has conditioned me into assuming she's gonna die soon. Splitting up is ...

Hi! I'm here! First off, again with the death! You are not someone to shy away from killing characters. It's good! A teenager and a mom with a baby; not ...

Hey! I'm back! Once again, killing off characters is good. Beth got more development, which is excellent, and killing Julie, while cutting off possible emotion, also eliminates dead weight. Comatose ...

Hi, it's me! I got your message about an earlier piece and came back to read it. Having read it, I can say this is a much better start to ...

Hi again! Killing another two "main characters" was a good idea. I expected to see a lot of Vincent, and losing him like that was shocking. Killing off so many ...

Hi! This is a good second part, continuing the action of the first and giving us a new cast to work with. Ben is interesting; I don't know how a ...

Hi! This is very good, an excellent start to a story that pulls us in and leaves us wanting more. It's short, but for a scene like this, that's good. ...

I liked it a lot. It has personality and a lot of room for a longer story or something more developed to grow out of it. I don't know if ...