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Re: A Happy Ending?
A bit too modern but other than that it was good
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: South
The story was gooood, but some of the names don't make sense. And the dialogue could be more direct about who is talking
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The way of Buddha
good story. I bet Papyrus approves
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The Tao
Very... descriptive about certain details, but it needs more detail about Tao and next time make the death of a main character more subtle.
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The Tao
Very... descriptive about certain details, but it needs more detail about Tao and next time make the death of a main character more subtle.
Mar 11, 2016