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Hello Esme. Master Pillet was a person positively viewing the world around him, with the prized ability to crush, likewise cuticle, any court opponents in the Great Grand Hall vicinity. ...

Hello Cheyanne. I apologize if this critique is overdue, I've been busy lately lol. Every bug, every worm, every mouse was detected as soon as they came near. Find a ...

As I crawled through the ever-decreasing chasm I remembered this numb feeling had happened before, but somehow I knew that it had never been quite like this. Decreasing? Hrmm sounds ...

Hey there Alice. Maybe she’s coming back? She cringed at the very thought. Her dad was too much in love with her mom. He couldn’t see how horrid that woman ...

Hello Tamora. I crawled. Nothing was right anymore, everything had changed in that one moment, and all my body would do now was crawl. The darkness was almost complete, light ...

Hey there Valor. Firstly, I think this piece rambles too much on how things work in the "afterlife". Such examples would be "the glue like food, day cards, etc etc". ...

I am back. Shiloh was forever smiling even when Amarie knew she was exhausted. Amarie really admired that quality but would never want to possess it. Her smiles always felt ...

Hehe, you ask, I deliver. The ice crashed around us like the sky was falling. I stood and waited while she tried to get her key into the lock. Nina’s ...

Hey there. As of late the thoughts that seemed to be taking about the most space in her brain were those of her parents. I suggest that you should use ...

Hey there Lynlyn, welcome back to YWS. “Silence!” one of the mutineers roared, and Isaac recognized the voice, for the first time, as distinctly American. If he had recognized the ...

Yay part 4. She dropped all her books on the couch, and as soon as the words could escape her lips, Nina said, “You should see my basement.” Ooo foreshadowing. ...

Finally, chapter 14. with a twirl that sent her black hair into a spiral she led them through the mass of people waiting in line. Capital "w". “This way gentlemen. ...

Hello Suzanne. Trisha took the box from me. “She gave you Jesus Cookies!” Haha. She kept smiling at something else, always smiling. She smiled like you would expect God to ...

Hey again Suzanne. I did promise that I would read the 2nd part of this :) The burnt red paint on the door was pealing like a flakey scab. Haha. ...

Hey there Esme. It's been a while. "Apparitions are not the dead called to life, but merely imprints of their old selves, Summoned for a set time to pass on ...