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I love this! I think the sounds in it are very good, and the words are highly descriptive. It is full of emotion even though it is a little bit ...

This overall seems to be a bit underdeveloped. Although I think the words that you do have are powerful, I think the poem is in need of a little more ...

I like the intrigue of this piece. It really grabbed me up, made me want to find out what was going to happen. I found that the writing style and ...

I have to say, Wasp, that your post is a bit unhelpful. Also, I disagree with it entirely: this poem IS going somewhere. I think it has potential, although the ...

Hi! Yay, I'm the first to review! 8D I thought this was a pretty powerful piece. I liked how it seemed like it was going to be about the news ...

This is a lovely start. The writing style is very sound, and the characters are consistent, although I'm not exactly sure that you have established a conflict. Also, the main ...