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Re: Sonnet of a Failed Mother
This poem was pretty powerful. I got a little bored towards the middle, and i had to think about the rhyming for a minute on a couple of them, but ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: An Angel's decent
This poem was very greatly written! I love the story it tells! You are talented and I hope to read more of your work! I also like short poems, because ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Wannabe
I think you just portrayed everyone's feelings about one of their friends at one time or another. That poem was so powerful. I was just wondering... did you base this ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Burned
The atmosphere of this story was so intense. But at the begining it was hard to tell how old Amy was. And if the dad jumped out of a window ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Tick...Tick...Boom.
:shock: :!: That was so amazingly written! The suspense was killing me! Are you going to add onto it? If you do then you need to let me know as ...
May 22, 2008