This poem was pretty powerful. I got a little bored towards the middle, and i had to think about the rhyming for a minute on a couple of them, but other than that it was a pretty good poem. And like elephantwalrus said, it isn't really a sonnet. (well, it didn't really seem like it to me.) But i just think that you should keep writing poems because you have a way of making it powerful in a way that is kinda hard to explain. but good job.
Points: 890
Reviews: 60
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