SporkPunk

Hello silentpages! Grammar: Unfortunately, I only have one real nitpick with this, and it's really, really nitpicky. Everyone wanted to ‘capture the moment’, just like the news anchors told them ...

Hey there! May I call you K for short? :smt001 So, let me tell you a little story about me and TWLOHA. (Click on the spoiler!) I didn't know much ...

Hi Celticmusicgirl! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. Grammar: Well, this bit was quite short, so there weren't many errors, so to speak, but there are a few. 1. ...

Hi Napalmerski! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. (By the way, I know what you mean by breaking off in the middle of things---it's terrible. xD) Grammar and things: ...

Hey there! :D I really liked this. The imagery and wording are fantastic. The flow isn't bad either, and you convey the message well. My favorite phrase has to be ...

Hi there! So, I agree that the rhyme didn't totally work, but you were really, really close. Good on you for that! I've never watched lost, so I can't quite ...

Hello there, Chef! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. I think this piece is really unique, and the alternating lines were clever. I know a lot of us have ...

Hi there! Maybe this makes me really nerdy, (I prefer the term geek! I mean, rather than taping my glasses when they broke, I had a guy friend teach me ...

Hi Tenyo! I really liked this. It was both adorable and sad. I don't know, I'm in between. I like the repetition of "poor little eraser dog" but I can ...

Hey there! I really liked this and the inspiration for the poem. It was meaningful but simple. I like that, how you kept from making it needlessly complex. Only nit ...

Hi there! I didn't really gather the same meaning that Tiger did. I sort of got that the portraits was, essentially, everyday life and all the negativity along with it. ...

She sat alone, in the rain She laughed as the wind blew ten years it was going to be Generally, numerals aren't used unless for a special reason. I couldn't ...

Hi there! So this is backwards I guess, but I read and reviewed chapter nine right before this. This chapter has some of the same issues I pointed out earlier, ...

Hi there! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today! This is really good. I love the imagery---it's so vivid and you feel like you're right there in the nightmare too. ...

Hi there! As requested, I won't go in-depth and review it randomly. I'll just give you my thoughts. It was funny, very good parody. The movie title was awesome, I ...