Spitfire

Okay well you concentrate on your exams, for now. :smt002 But when you're finished, I suggest you organize your chapters, because this is really confusing for people. You got like ...

I don't think so!!! I'll make sure of it :wink: Nah, it can happen, but so far I've thought of the details, so it'll be for later on that I'll ...

Hey girls! Thanks for the comments! For Tanya, the name was intentional, of course. And Nicolas really is in his fifties, since as I said, Nana gave birth when she ...

Thanks for the comments guys!...well girls :lol: I hadn't noticed the "soup" though, so I'll go change that right now... As for the cop, he's going to be a part ...

No problem :wink:

Yeah you can delete them when you go on your user portfolio, look at the file names and there should be a delete button. But if you don't want to ...

Yeah I did, I started reading the first chapter with Joshua and then the second. But then I saw there was a different chapter 1 and 2 with a different ...

OK, this was good, but my only thing was the time difference you mentioned. I don't remember you saying anything about it being months since he left his village. I ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone, really appreciate it! As for Lauren, it's not harsh what you said, you spoke your mind, that's all. As per Crys' abilities, I don't want ...

Thanks for the reviews! There will be more action from now on, so I hope you'll like it! PS: There's a reason for her parents, it'll come later...

Actually they are doctors, I mentionned it in another chapter, I just forgot to say that they were the head doctors also, instead of just managers :lol: Oops But thanks ...

Thanks guys, I really appreciate the reviews :D

Love it! Since I'm the only person to have read the original - I think - I must say it's a lot better! I didn't notice any big grammar mistakes, ...

As usual, I thought it was good. I honestly have nothing else to say :lol: So keep it coming!

Ok, well we know a little bit more now. Guess the kid unwillingly went on a journey, adventure, whatever you wanna call it! There's not really anything else to say, ...