Spitfire

Aiya Azila! Now that I think about it, I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours... muhahahaha! Just kidding. The children pull on their parents' clothing and set off ...

Hey Shub! Spitfire here to reivew! Normally I would read everybody else's reviews as to not repeat what they say, but everybody wrote such long reviews that I'm just gonna ...

Hello there Freaks. I have to admit I read this a few days ago, but I read it from my Ipod, where it is impossible for me to do a ...

Sorry it took me so long, but I'm here to do chapter 2 :D *reads* “Hope left the world when the Dawn King passed into the other realm, but I ...

Hey there Bailey! Spitfire to the review rescue 8) (I know, kinda lame) Suddenly, in the night, a Light flickered. On, then off, then on again. Its power driving back ...

Actually, Emma, I heard it first.. muhahahaha 8) She actually got the idea from a dream, told me about it the next morning since she was sleeping over at my ...

All right! As I said, I shall review! As everyone else seems to have found the typo mistakes, I'll just forget about them. No need to repeat them. I do ...

I honestly think you should post them separately. People don't usually like to have to review like 2-3 chapters at the same time. Also, when posting chapters for a novel, ...

Wow. I was going to review this post, but really RachaelElg! Wow! Everything I was going to tell her, you said it perfectly! But just to make it seem like ...

Hey there Bladesmith! I see you've just recently joined YWS. So welcome :) I shall begin by reading your story and then nit-picking. (Yes, not always fun to hear those, ...

First thing's first: I love your avvie. 8) Second thing, I like the names. If it's truly a story about other worlds, you need unique names. And these ones are ...

Booyah! Hey Dianne! Spitfire's here to review :) Three turns of dainty handle I don't understand what you were trying to say here.. People here are so happy, their smiles ...

Hiya Mazey! It's Spitfire's time to shine 8) "Why do you steal?" her father had once asked her. She was but a child; ignorant and foolish, and was easily caught ...

Allrighty, Spitfire here to review! “Sara! Go back to bed!” a man with a knife said. I think he was my dad. He looked around. How had the man gotten ...

Hey there Baboon! Thought I'd drop in for a review 8) ... The main thing I noticed was this sentence: As the lightening flashed and the rains sliced down, as ...