Spitfire

Hey WFL!! Long time no talk ;) So I see no one has reviewed this; let me work my magic :P You may have heard of him. Or you think ...

Hey there Ultraviolet!! Judge Spitfire here for the First Chapter Contest ;) On to reviewing!! Because she has to, even in her own school. Even in other countries, he has ...

Hey CCB! Spitfire here to review for the First Chapter contest!! They all knew why. Everyone knew why . This is unnecessary repetition. Legend told that demons, under the guise ...

Hey Cairo! Time for Spitfire to review!! (This is for the First Chapter contest) These were three grown guys , with pretty much nothing in common, living under the same ...

Hey Alabaster! It's First Chapter contest judging time :D I gotta say it; your title makes me laugh, only because my sister, borntobeawriter, wrote a story and the title is ...

Hey Sarebear, Spitfire here to review for the First Chapter Contest! Leaning back in the peeling faux-leather chair, Cody puts her hands behind her head and closes her eyes. The ...

Well hey there! Judge Spitfire here for the First Chapter Contest :) Let's get our thinking caps on, ladies and gentlemen, 'cause there's going to be some EXTREME REVIEWING!! Here. ...

Finally here, finally here! Took me long enough but I'm finally gonna review this!! Sighing heavily, she placed her book face d down onto table and pointed to the chair ...

Chapter 2 is up :3 I didn't read the version before (didn't even know it had been edited 'til tanya said so), so basing myself on this one only :) ...

Sorry Tanya, but I'm with Skinsy and Emma on this... you stalk. (don't try to hide it, you know you do) Ahem. Moving on. Chapter 10 here I go! I ...

Normally I'd give you a really long and detailed review. But since I already have...there's nothing for me to do XD The few things I do remember that I'd mentioned ...

Hey there!! Spitfire here to review! I didn't find any nit-picks, so I'll skip that and go straight for the main things. First off; your characters seem wayyyy too perfect. ...

Hey Rissa! I noticed you only have 1 comment, so although I haven't read your first chapter, I'll go ahead and review by what I see :) Here I go! ...

Hey Skinsy! I just saw your "status" and thought I'd take a peek :) Here we go! So I actually don't have any nit-picks. Rather rare and pretty cool :D ...

Hey Beginningtowrite, Spitfire here to review!! "What?" I snapped at her, angry that she'd disrupted me Not sure I'd say "disrupted me" as it was the trance Jemma disrupted, not ...