SpiritedWolfe

Thanks so much! I think a few edits didn't save, because I swear I remember catching and changing those xD We'll also see if your view changes as the story ...

ZAYLN 4EVAH.

Sorry, Writer. Syrin is almost dead actually. As of now, there isn't much hope that it will be picked back up until Christmas xD BUT I SHALL TRY.

Terri isn't a person, it's the magic xD (Mentioned in Chapter 13) and I changed Clare to Kelly (mentioned in Chapter 14 Part 1). Another thing which I don't think ...

Oh, and I switch back and forth between metric and standard, though I prefer metric. I think in the next part I mention miles, so don't be confused xD

School is rude. I have so much world building to do before I can pick this back up again D: (I don't know if I even can continue thing until ...

Alright then. I shall anticipate more soon :3 thanks for explaining that.

Ah it makes sense. Well I hope you keep the habit. It's interesting.

Make her evil!

:3 (Sorry, spur of the moment rant...)

Just forget about redundancy okay? Forget it. xD In /every single/ review you do its there. I GET IT ALREADY! I HAVE A PROBLEM. Anyways, thanks for the review! ^^

Thanks for the review! He's sixteen, when I originally had him fourteen. Though is he's so young, things I have planned in later chapters don't really work, and Carsten is ...

Thanks so much! I will definitely keep your advice in mind whenever I decide to write another poem!

(So as I'm writing Chapter 17, I came back to this.) Thanks for the review, better late than never :) Though, I'm confused what you mean by 'include some of ...

Thanks so much! Yeah, I know the ending was lacking in the details, since the word limit was 2,000 and I wasn't even able to get this under that xD ...