SpiritedWolfe

With the way he says his father died, I'm trying to show that he doesn't care for his parents, or even like them. Thanks for the review!

I have it both ways because the students call her differently. Subtle thing, but I'm trying to show that Marrian is showing her more respect. Thanks for the review!

Thank you so much!

Thanks again for this. To answer your question about Harrison, in the first chapter he said he wanted to join. When I'm going back and editing after finishing the draft, ...

Long over due, but thank you once again :3 Carsten is older than Sam xD (Good thing you thought that last time though. There's a reason for his actions.)

Thanks so much for the review! To answer your question about why Sam would be hesitant, Ethan mentioned that the Guards almost caught them last time and he thought it ...

I eagerly await more. My friend. I applaud you. Now just wait until Syrin :3

It's fine. :) Practice makes perfect. Trust me, the early chapters of Syrin were worse.

Sorry for the repeat. There was a glitch.

Thank you so much, for both reviews. I agree the first part was sort of dull, mostly for the fact that I had writer's block for the longest time, and ...

Thanks for the review! Your little nitpicks always help. Though I'll probably keep the 'anyways' thing, because it feels more natural for dialogue. If it were narration, I'd change it. ...

I have a specific club for this, so it'll be easier to keep track of updates:

Alright, good job :3 Go to your review of last review of Chap 15 and click the link at the bottom which leads to 16. Tell me if you can't ...

If you continue reading, you'll find out more. There isn't really one.

Thank you so much! For the beginning, I was thinking about including something apart of the lesson, but I felt like that was too used. Of course beginnings are my ...