SpiritedWolfe

:DDD Thank you so much for this review! Also, yeah I totally get you about the pacing. The context to this is I wrote this story in one night for ...

Thank you so very much for continuing to read

Thank you! ^^ The lost in mind section I added on a whim, so I agree there is definitely more I can explore with that! (I also realize now that ...

Thanks for the review! You're very speedy haha. I'm glad this clarified something! Also, I didn't initially describe all the aspects of influence with Hunter (like the visuals) because the ...

Thank you again!!! All of these were really helpful, and I'm happy to see you're enjoying the story so far ^^

Thank you!!! Just as a heads up, most of this novel I already have written from NaNo (and I'm pretty bad about proofreading xDD) so your comments on grammar/wording are ...

I honestly forgot about the name comment, and it actually is important but I've just realized that I never explained it in the novel

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate you commenting on the presentation of information because I always struggle with striking a balance between giving enough to be understood but not ...

I thought the name Derik had sounded familiar! I'll leave it to that I read those parts like a month apart, haha. And it's not too big a deal because ...

Thank you so much for your reviews! ^^ I%u2019m glad you%u2019re enjoying the story so far! Also, thank you for pointing out those mistakes, haha. I tend to be very ...

Thank you!! ^^ Your point about Rachel's reaction makes total sense! I've rewritten that exact reaction several times and I never knew how to get it right, so I'll be ...

Thanks for the review ^^ Eric isn't going to die! The Leader is just making sure he knows his place, and I wanted to show the Leader's disrespect for the ...

Thank you again!! ... and yes I do italicize the word influence every time it's used in context of the magic. I liked being a little extra about it? But ...

Hi!! :D Thanks for the review ^^ Also yes. I did say there way no mouth >:3 And yes, he saw their mouths moving. (tl;dr: magic, which should get explained ...

Thank you again for your review ^^ I'm happy to hear you're still enjoying it, and now that I think about it, I may need to include a bit more ...