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Re: The Road Home (Chapter 2: The Lone Road) PART 1
Hello again Prehistoric, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors, for I am on my phone.) Before anything else, I do want to point out that you ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: The Road Home (Chapter 2: The Lone Road) PART II
Hello again Prehistoric, for the third time, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors, for I am on my phone.) Not much to comment on, since most ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: The Road Home (Chapter 1: Goldspire Pass)
Hello Prehistoric, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors, for I am on a phone.) First some little nit-picks: And every time he did, he was fascinated ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 2: Trouble in School
Hello Cowboy, Wolf here for a review. Even though I won't specifically point out nitpicks, I will go over a few. First, towards the end of this, I noticed a ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Game On Level 0.3
Hello Nira, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any grammatical/spelling errors, for I am using a tablet.) First off, some little nit-picks: Throughout the night sleep was scares. So ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: But I Still Love You
Hello creating, Wolf here for a review. First off, some nitpicks: Kira screamed. “No!” She shrieked eerily. Here is a bit repetitive. First it is mentioned that she scream, and ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Edge
Hello Fire, Wolf here to review, as you have requested. I am extremely confused on what I just read. So I assume there is cats and birds, but what kind ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Standing at the Edge of Tartarus
Hello Stuck, Wolf here for a review. First off, some nitpicks: ...and endless abyss that had no visible end. The 'and' should be 'an', should it not? But to others, ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Untitled Story 1:2
Hello again Flutter, Wolf here for yet another review. A few little nitpicks: I turn the keys in the lock to lock the door behind me and I walk away... ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Untitled Story 1:1 (No name for now)
Hello Flutter, Wolf here for a review! First off some nitpicks: I press my ear to the wall, hoping to hear something but, as usual, there was a deafening silence... ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Redwing - Chapter 2 *Edited*
Hello Utopia, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any spelling/gramma mistakes, for I am using a tablet.) So I have one little sentence nitpick: The chute’s went through the ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Triden
Hello Jona, Wolf here for a review. First off some technical issues. Long ago in the time of desolation. When Tarew the god of evil and his brother Degnur the ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: The Ball that Went Psycho
Hello Uncon, Wolf here for a review. Usually I would start off with a few nit-picks, but while reading, there was nothing that particularly stood out that seemed wrong or ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Letter from a Lost Soldier
Hello Sheep, Wolf here to review. (Please excuse any spelling/grammar mistakes, for I am on my phone.) So I don't have many nit-picks, and even then it's only two. I ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Misery or Humanity
Hello Rocket, Wolf here for a review. (Please excuse any spelling/grammar mistakes, for I am on my phone). Usually I would start off with a few nit-picks, but I didn't ...
May 31, 2014