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SpiritedWolfe

and i kept walking, even if my feet were too tired to hold me up anymore

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love Chapter 2 {Edited}

    Hello Uma, Wolf here for a review. So before I dive into content-wise stuff, I want to mention a few technic things. First off, after dialogue, there should be some ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Review, Narrative Re: Why I Did What I Did (What Did I Do?)

    Hello wtp, Wolf here for more of an evaluation. Since this isn't really a normal piece to review, it is really unique and I don't think I've seen anyone do ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Tracking Point (Chapter Two)

    Hello MrTilgen, Wolf here for a review. Oh, so a murder mystery? I haven't read your previous chapter on this, so I was slightly confused here and there, like when ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Untitled- Chapter 2

    Hello Blocked, Wolf here for a review. Alright, so I didn't read the first chapter and prologue like I should have, but I am still here. For the most part, ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Chapters 1 through 3

    Hello mynames, Wolf here for a review. Since this is a kind of long piece, and it has more than one chapter, I will split up my review like so. ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: People that I know from my head~Chapter 2

    Hello Pinkie, Wolf here for a review. So, rawrafied got most of the little nitpicks, and I would recommend you to just take one look over this carefully reading every ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter Three The Squall

    Hello again, r4, Wolf here for yet another review. Oh yes, this is much improved from the last one. For the most part, you're dialogue is quite realistic, but the ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter Two The Theft

    Hello again, r4, Wolf here for a review. So, there are quite a few grammatical/spelling errors in this piece, but most of them are grammar. Such as a missing word ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: High-and-Mighty Strikes Again

    Hello Savvy, Wolf here for a review. Usually I'm not one for fanfics, but I have to admit, this did catch my attention. I'm not necessarily a 'hardcore' Hunger Games ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Misery or Humanity, Chapter 2

    Hello again Rocket, I do recall reviewing the first part of this, and I am back again for more! Wow, this was amazing, like before. Once again, no nitpicks here, ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fendall Woods (Part II)

    Hello wtp, Wolf here for a review. First off, I have a few nitpicks: Crappy, of course. But then again... Usually it's not good to start a sentence with the ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Stash - Chapter 2

    Hello fight4, Wolf here for a review. So this is a quite interesting chapter. Normally, I'm not into realistic teen fiction, but I have to admit, after I started reading ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Once again, Hello Kay, Wolf here for a third review tonight. I am hooked. This is just absolutely wonderful and I cannot believe that I didn't stumble upon this earlier ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hello again, Kay, Wolf here for another review. I am back again, still having not read the previous chapter, but I will eventually when I have the spare time. I ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hello Kay, Wolf here for a review. I will say right away that I have not read the other chapters of this novel, but I do intend on reading future ...

    Jun 29, 2014


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